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Submitted: March 2, 2008
File Size: 1.7 MB
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Resolution: 800×597
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Make: Canon
Model: Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XT
Shutter Speed: 5/1 second
F Number: F/inf
Focal Length: 0 mm
ISO Speed: 100
Date Picture Taken: Mar 1, 2008, 9:03:35 PM

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What catches my eye in this image is the very sculptural quality of th subject matter. The warehouse appears to jump out of the background and into the viewers space due to the excellent print quality of the image. The tones of the image match the subject matter magnificently. The decaying brown hues of the building are a perfect compliment to the physical decay of the building itself. What intrigues me most is your choice of composition. I personally would crop a small portion off the bottom, but I don't think there is anything wrong with the way this image is in its current state. The triangular, step like subject definitely brings additional meaning to the image, whereas a straight on picture in the same light might fail to impress as much. The angle at which you shot this image really makes the picture, I think.
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An amazing art, the contrast is beautiful, i must say it truly brings attention. But the lighter side of the building brings in a little more attention then the shadows. I personally would have liked to see the shadows a bit more, to see more detail.The windows glance the light too, which bring more attention to the bottom then the stop witch is fairly shadowed; Also if the photo was brought down a bit more you would be able to see what in near the grass/dirt/sidewalk/etc. like that gate way would of showed more attention then. Overall it is a lovley piece and have no more critique about it. *note it is a very original piece, not seeing many more old buildings around. I give it high ratings <3
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Probably be taken down and a skyscraper pt up eventually.

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I hope not, it's just too beautiful for that.

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I know. I hate to see old buildings and landmarks being torn down.

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oh, beautiful. i love how
you got the sign in there.

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Wow! :wow: This look like a movie set!

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It does rather, haha, I wouldn't have noticed that

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o.k. and p.s. i knew your smart ass little wave got that security gaurd called on us... ladies dont care if your cute or not. probably just pissed her off.

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that wasn't even at this building, and it doesn't matter, we weren't doing anything illegal

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